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Written, June 24, 2024
For The Premiere Contest, “Contrast”
Sponsor, Hilo Poet

Our white and black- their muted grays, that paint life's picture through our days; the good and bad- all in between, makes life's true shade- a blended scene. Bright whites expand with pristine joy as rays of sunshine fast employ, uplifting feelings in the heart where hopeful dreams will always start. But then- the dreary, blackened skies with thunder clouds that bring sad sighs, contrast with joys to blot their glow; adjusting with a shadowed show. Life is a contrast- birth and death; and in between, with every breath- our black and white- their grays, all blend to paint a life we comprehend.

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Date: 7/13/2024 3:54:00 AM
Gentle flow of thoughts, amazing rhymes dear poet. Congratulations. Happy writing.
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Date: 7/13/2024 3:02:00 AM
Weave of perspectives broadens its conceptual views. Mahalo, my friend, with your participation in the contest and win, Aloha, William
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Date: 6/24/2024 11:28:00 AM
Excellent! Enjoyed your contrasts, so true to life, Sandra!
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