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glorifying days gone by meanwhile wasting time i’ve got nothing more than an alibi to make sense of this paradigm i’m betting on a future paradise where starry moonlit nights entice and sunshine saves the day while guileless children play Submitted on April 6, 2025 for contest STEVIE WONDER sponsored by KAREN JONES (Pastime Paradise) - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 4/17/2025 12:22:00 AM
Line thanks for your entry and congratulations on your win in my contest! Enjoyed the imagery and imaginative thinking! Have a fabulous day!
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Date: 4/17/2025 7:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Karen ~ most appreciated

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