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Softly the keys find a resonance pure, softly adrift o’er a metronome stream, adrift past the harmonies, three quarter time, past dreamers and slumbering chords shimmered gleam, where dreamers all long to caress what is heard, all feeling vibrato on breezes a’ mist, feeling the music ‘pon moonbeams of time to capture the tune a pianist hath kissed, a tune from the heart beating tempos of joy, from deep down inside to the edge of the scale, deep in a place that shall find no return, lost in a breath of crescendo’s exhale, a beautiful euphony born of desire, a beautiful opus descends from above, an opus of sensual echoes to feast, of love songs, melodic, composed by our love
I was challenged to write a poem about a piano player using the poetic form Serpentine. It is where each line begins and ends with the same word but each line feeds into the next in order to keep the serpent like movement going. I thought I would pop in and share this with you. Oh...Hi, it has been a while. : )

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Date: 7/30/2023 1:48:00 PM
Hi Chris, this is so beautiful, nice to see you back writing, feels like things getting back to normal.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/1/2023 7:02:00 AM
Thanks my friend. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 2/27/2023 6:13:00 AM
Wonderful to see this beauty win POTD, Chris, congratulations:)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:13:00 PM
Thanks a bunch Jo
Date: 2/26/2023 8:38:00 PM
wow just great poetic lyric; great to read this lovely poem; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:13:00 PM
Thank you so very much
Date: 2/26/2023 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Chris! Whether music, voice, painting, writing or poetry; creativity comes from the heart and is art. Enjoy your day of honor, Bill
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:13:00 PM
I appreciate it, Bill
Date: 2/26/2023 12:33:00 AM
Well done Chris and Congratulations on receiving POTD....
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:13:00 PM
Thanks so much Michael
Date: 2/25/2023 11:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Jeanette
Date: 2/25/2023 6:23:00 PM
this is so musical and beautiful, what a master piece, thanks yann
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:12:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 2/25/2023 6:06:00 PM
What can I say? Even the administration agrees with me on how FAB this poem is. Keep on keeping on, my friend! Congrats, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Buddy. I appreciate you
Date: 2/25/2023 5:30:00 PM
Wow Chris - that's a great effort and a marvelous outcome.. It is a super POTD and its good to see you back! Best - Ken
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:12:00 PM
Thank you Ken for your nice comment
Date: 2/25/2023 5:25:00 PM
"Softly the keys capture the tune." Indeed they do, and my heart melts each and every time I hear the melody. (You know how much I love piano music). So beautiful and romantic. Your words leave me in complete awe. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Brandy and yes I know, I am thrilled you liked this one
Date: 2/25/2023 5:17:00 PM
This form is new to me, bit fascinating and effective and quite a challenge - well done - worthy POTD.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:11:00 PM
Thanks Terry. Give it a try sometime
Date: 2/25/2023 4:41:00 PM
Love this ! The cadence and movement while reading it so magical and musical all in one ! A pleasure to have your words fill my mind . Big congratulations on POTD Chris ! Susan :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:11:00 PM
Thank you so very much Susan. I am happy you liked this
Date: 2/25/2023 2:48:00 PM
Chris, what a beautiful poem written in an interesting form. And congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY, honor, blessings, Constance
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:10:00 PM
Thank you so very much
Date: 2/25/2023 1:56:00 PM
Chris, back to congratulate you on your POTD :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:10:00 PM
Thanks my friend
Date: 2/25/2023 11:41:00 AM
A lovely Serpentine form poem Chris, you rose to the challenge well. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Belle for your kindness
Date: 2/25/2023 10:49:00 AM
Beautiful write, Congrats on POTD
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph
Date: 2/25/2023 10:27:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Chris :) - hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:09:00 PM
Thank you my friend
Date: 2/25/2023 7:45:00 AM
Back to say Kudos for POTD. Have a great weekend, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:09:00 PM
Thanks my friend
Date: 2/25/2023 7:02:00 AM
Superb writing, Chris. Love the poem and poem.. Congratulations on POTD! Charlie
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Charles
Date: 2/25/2023 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations Chris on your POTD. A breath of crescendo's exhale. I think you're a Talented writer Chris. PEACE my friend. VB Rogers Black panther
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 2/25/2023 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations Chris on your POTD. A breath of crescendo's exhale. I think you're a Talented writer Chris. PEACE my friend VB Rogers Black panther
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:08:00 PM
Thanks a bunch Val
Date: 2/25/2023 6:51:00 AM
Superb penning Chris. A lilting quality that flows so well. Congratulations on the well0deserved honor of POTD! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda.
Date: 2/25/2023 6:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A creative/fun write. Thanks for the note about the poetic form Serpentine. You did a great job. Good to see you back. Last fall I took a few months off because of pain. Have a blessed day writing away..............................
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:08:00 PM
Thank you so very much Paula.
Date: 2/25/2023 5:49:00 AM
Nice, Chris! I like that serpentine form - new one I'll have to try -
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:05:00 PM
It was fun John, give it a try
Date: 2/25/2023 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations for this brilliant POTD. I love it. A Fave for me :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2023 2:05:00 PM
Thank you my friend
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