Come It Will

Mist sweeps the garden Settles like Saharan dust Gold round the lake's edge.

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Joan C. Fingon

Date: 1/30/2020 5:55:00 PM

Nicely done and in 17 syllables! as 5-7-5

Peter Rees
Date: 2/14/2021 5:12:00 AM

Thank you Joan. Just discovering haiku.

Kim James

Date: 1/16/2020 9:39:00 AM

That is a lovely image, thank you!

Peter Rees
Date: 2/14/2021 5:14:00 AM

You’re very kind, Kim. Thank you.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/15/2020 10:50:00 AM

this is such a beautiful image... exquisite haiku Peter!

Peter Rees
Date: 2/14/2021 5:15:00 AM

Thanks for this lovely comment, Sandra.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/15/2020 7:59:00 AM

Exquisite depiction of scenic moments, Peter.

Peter Rees
Date: 2/14/2021 5:16:00 AM

Nice to hear from you Vijay. Thanks for your comment.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/15/2020 7:11:00 AM

Rather beautiful.

Peter Rees
Date: 2/14/2021 5:16:00 AM

Thank you my friend.