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Colour Awash

I brushed the world With my eyes so moist The hues she spawned Shed a million tears Whispers abound This was god's own domain My eyes they blushed We are colour awash- (c)copyright-vijay nair

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Ralph Mason

Date: 8/28/2013 7:18:00 PM

great imagery and feeling, warm thoughts, Ralph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/28/2013 7:12:00 PM

Congrats on your poem being featured

Aiden Asoll

Date: 8/28/2013 9:26:00 AM

Saw this come up on the homepage and wow! Its so concise, you pack so much meaning into those few, carefully selected words, and the imagery is great! Then seeing from the comment below that this is your first one, its a brilliant piece of poetry and if this is your first, I hope there are many more to come, read it four times already :P And yeah, I only joined myself a few days ago but welcome! Its a great community, they all give the best feed back, from yar's Aiden.

Skat A

Date: 8/24/2013 4:38:00 PM

Deep & beautiful Vijay, Your first poem on the soup is excellent and fun for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/23/2013 9:49:00 PM

Hi Vijay, I very much enjoyed this brilliant piece, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/23/2013 3:57:00 PM

Welcome to P-Soup, Vijay! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)