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On that cold night my heart did sink, I was the only one standing weak. my heart went flip-flop, flip-flop while he spoke, that was the end of you and me. He said, "I wasn't good enough." I asked, "why?" He said, "'cause you're a liar," my heart died. 3 years of my life I dedicated to him. On our wedding day he did this sin. copyright by Shanaye Hurtt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/24/2010 9:27:00 AM
I'm glad everyone can feel the emotion that I was trying to portray behind this poem, but this hasn't really happened before.
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Date: 5/23/2010 11:45:00 AM
how devastating
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Date: 5/23/2010 6:58:00 AM
blow me away, a typical person to do such a thing. It is sad and coldblooded, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/23/2010 6:55:00 AM
WOW, STRONG WRITE, FOR HIM TO DO THAT IS JUST WRONG
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Date: 5/23/2010 6:54:00 AM
A very expressive on lost love
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