Cocoon

To Be Free To Sleep Amist Gazing Waiting Awakening Thoughtless Napping Meantime Moons Shining Glistening Dreams Flying Wombs Rhyming Metamorphic Swimming Structures Growing Becoming Alive Wings Emerging Shedding Pains Yesterday's Belonging Becoming Weight less Breathless Jumping Freefalling Mindlessly Trying Finally Flying

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Chris Green

Date: 10/27/2016 2:56:00 PM

Such a vivid and creative stream of thought. I like how you did this, the words seem to morph into each other. I really enjoyed the combination of Yesterday's Belonging Becoming Weight less

Chris Green
Date: 10/27/2016 4:39:00 PM

Sounds like a plan to me.

Holly Bohto
Date: 10/27/2016 4:00:00 PM

I'll have paint a watercolor listening to lunatic fringe. by red rider for this poem

Holly Bohto
Date: 10/27/2016 3:55:00 PM

Thanks Chris. You seen drawn to the poems I write in 2 minutes with no editing.