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Coconut's Fall

In lands where sun and sea entwine, Where palm trees dance and waves align, There thrives a fruit, both rough and brown, The coconut, a tropical crown. Amidst the breeze, it hangs with pride, Its essence felt far and wide. A marvel wrapped in husky shroud, Its secrets whisper tales aloud. From high above, it takes the fall, Yet within, it harbors all. Sweet nectar trapped in fibrous hold, A treasure chest, a story untold. Beneath the tropic, azure sky, In sandy soils, it learns to lie. Roots that grip the earth so tight, Anchored in both day and night. Coconut, your virtues vast, From first to last, they ever last. Your water quenches deepest thirst, In your embrace, we find life's burst. In kitchens, you're a culinary muse, In every dish, you leave a bruise, A mark of flavor, rich and pure, In every bite, your essence sure. Oil, you yield, a potion rare, For skin and hair, you deeply care. In every drop, a healing touch, A balm that soothes, it means so much. In island lore and folklore grand, You grace the art of every land. From crafts to songs, you play a part, Coconut, you touch the heart. A fruit so humble, yet so grand, In grains of sand, across the land, You teach us lessons, deep and wise, In your simplicity, strength lies. Oh, coconut, in sun and rain, Your essence courses through each vein, A symbol of the tropic's grace, In every form, you leave a trace.

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Date: 10/19/2023 4:04:00 AM
Very nice! Congratulations!
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Jahnavi Singh
Date: 10/20/2023 9:57:00 AM
Grateful for the warmth you share, In your kindness, we find care, Thank you, dear friend, with all my heart, For the generosity you impart. In words so brief, yet deeply meant, My gratitude to you is sent, For your kindness, I sincerely say, Thank you, in every way.
Date: 10/18/2023 9:19:00 PM
Back to say congrats on your trophy win!!!!
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Jahnavi Singh
Date: 10/20/2023 9:57:00 AM
Thank You
Date: 10/18/2023 1:51:00 PM
Your rhymes flow effortlessly. Beautiful tribute!
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Jahnavi Singh
Date: 10/20/2023 9:57:00 AM
Grateful for the warmth you share, In your kindness, we find care, Thank you, dear friend, with all my heart, For the generosity you impart. In words so brief, yet deeply meant, My gratitude to you is sent, For your kindness, I sincerely say, Thank you, in every way.
Date: 10/18/2023 12:23:00 PM
Perfect ode to a coconut Jahnayi. Congratulations! :)
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Jahnavi Singh
Date: 10/20/2023 9:56:00 AM
Grateful for the warmth you share, In your kindness, we find care, Thank you, dear friend, with all my heart, For the generosity you impart. In words so brief, yet deeply meant, My gratitude to you is sent, For your kindness, I sincerely say, Thank you, in every way.
Date: 10/18/2023 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun write. I Love your line, "Coconut, you touch the heart." They sure do. Have a great day writing away....................
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Jahnavi Singh
Date: 10/20/2023 9:56:00 AM
Grateful for the warmth you share, In your kindness, we find care, Thank you, dear friend, with all my heart, For the generosity you impart. In words so brief, yet deeply meant, My gratitude to you is sent, For your kindness, I sincerely say, Thank you, in every way.
Date: 10/8/2023 6:51:00 AM
A rhymer at heart... good to read your excellent rhyming skill and cadence talent. Nice to meet you, Jahnavi.
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Jahnavi Singh
Date: 10/20/2023 9:56:00 AM
Grateful for the warmth you share, In your kindness, we find care, Thank you, dear friend, with all my heart, For the generosity you impart. In words so brief, yet deeply meant, My gratitude to you is sent, For your kindness, I sincerely say, Thank you, in every way.
Date: 10/8/2023 5:47:00 AM
Brilliant coconut poem. You covered all the bases of what a coconut is and it's uses. The poem is engaging and informative wrapped in melodic rhyme. Great job. Surely you have a contest winner here.
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Jahnavi Singh
Date: 10/8/2023 6:50:00 AM
Grateful for the warmth you share, In your kindness, we find care, Thank you, dear friend, with all my heart, For the generosity you impart. In words so brief, yet deeply meant, My gratitude to you is sent, For your kindness, I sincerely say, Thank you, in every way.

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