clouds

staring at the clouds on a summer afternoon ~grass prickles my back

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/29/2024 3:56:00 PM

Hello Craig, I am a cloud watcher. I enjoy to watch the different shapes of the clouds. Enjoy your weekend my friend. /Darlene/

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/29/2024 1:29:00 AM

that's summer rashes for you, craig...great aha in the end! :)

Sand Blown

Date: 6/28/2024 7:38:00 PM

...good one....how can one ever forget laying on a freshly cut lawn and watching the sky.....stan

Tom Woody

Date: 6/28/2024 10:23:00 AM

Sounds like bliss to me, prickling notwithstanding

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/28/2024 8:54:00 AM

Though you seem to stare into the afternoon, perhaps lost in thought, the grass reminds you of reality. I love this, Craig! A fave!