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Clouded Secrets

Why do the stars die? What if such light vanishes? What if glows darken? Seek new horizons, Illuminate dim radiance, Burnish darkened clouds... Should glows be polished? Should obscure stellar cores shine? Are they even bright? Clear lucid dreaming, Scintillant astral travels, Flashing dimensions... Should universal Concealments be enlightened From ambivalence? Should such dull secrets Be revealed or get unveiled From black nebulas? Dusk, dawn, day, night, gloom, Time, space, gravity...; Are they all shaded?

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Date: 6/16/2016 11:03:00 AM
My Hubby would love this. He has an Astro Physics Degree and worked on space projects.
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Date: 3/17/2016 11:21:00 PM
Ruben, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/14/2016 9:44:00 PM
Ruben, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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