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Clarity's Pure Thoughts

The true light unites stream of object too subject, refraction repaired...

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/17/2010 10:54:00 AM

Very profound, Jay. Really like this Haiku. There is a lot more in the message than can be found on the surface. Well done, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2010 8:23:00 AM

Pure thoughts well defined by this images nicely, jay

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/16/2010 9:27:00 PM

Jay, I really enjoyed your thoughts on my "stagnant heart" piece.. As for your haiku, you brought your point across in a very unique way, thanks for the smiles ;)

Zaeem Yousaf

Date: 12/16/2010 3:48:00 PM

dear you are right. but unfartunately you are not aware of the place where sitting i wrote in. in the meeting of oppresser were killing humanity so it impelled me to criticize youth when enough power sometime leades to ignorence and violence comparatively the old who has difficulty to just take steps.(with the reference you commented on my poetry-youth is an evil abode). thanks! you inferred at last right.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/16/2010 2:58:00 PM

Great words and meaning expressed in this gem..very enjoyed your style....Michael ps check out my poem "Living in a Dream" love your opinion...

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 12/16/2010 2:10:00 PM

the difference between illusion and reality,or the disillusioned...