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City Alone

Life seems to be a chain of highs and lows That we routinely deal with come what may But there is one that seems worse than others Have you seen a vibrant city decay For eons filled with bright lights and romance Where ambition and laughter fill the air And then one day the traffic seems lighter The city seems to be stalled somewhere It takes time but the lights begin to dim The laughter of children becomes restrained Houses - once homes - sit empty and weathered Once full bank accounts become slowly drained And then one day it is completely done A city sits decayed and all alone Dogs roam the empty and broken sidewalks Their future like the city's is unknown 9-22-20 Contest: Decay Sponsor : Constance La France

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Date: 10/5/2020 6:29:00 PM
This poem is so true, Larry. I see the reality in your writing. It scares me sometimes the way the world seems to be going. Saved in my favorites. :) ~Angie
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Date: 9/30/2020 5:50:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win ... an excellent poem ... an image that is reflected in every city, Larry - // Anne-Lise :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/30/2020 7:46:00 AM
Thanks so much. Sad but true....
Date: 9/29/2020 9:22:00 PM
Great canvas you've written, Larry , congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/30/2020 7:45:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 9/29/2020 3:15:00 PM
Larry, I have goosebumps. Your poem is phenomenal. Meter, straight forward spoken expression, spot on. Sad and applicable tale. Dog references at end finished off what I saw entirely throughout very clearly. Thanks for your excellent take and translation. A highly deserved Top Win is yours!!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/29/2020 4:04:00 PM
Thank you so much! I am afraid we have all seen too many scenes like that...
Date: 9/29/2020 1:46:00 PM
Larry, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me _Constance
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/29/2020 4:03:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. It is a sad butreal subject. Thank you for the placement.
Date: 9/29/2020 10:58:00 AM
Super imagery Larry. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/29/2020 4:01:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!!
Date: 9/23/2020 6:15:00 PM
Great and timely enter for this contest! Good luck!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/24/2020 1:20:00 AM
Thank you Kim !

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