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Constance La France's Christmas Poem Contest

               December 12, 2024

Christmas Snow

“Cats teach us how to enjoy life. They savor every moment, from 
the warm sun on their backs to the joy of a well-played pounce.”
                                                                       – Anonymous


Snow stopped rubbing against my leg to get attention
when he became curious about Christmas tree lights
tangled all over the floor to the point of contention.
I saw him begin nibbling the bulbs, taking little bites,
so I shooed him away in a moment of apprehension,
afraid that he might break one. Oh, the hypertension!

That lasted all of thirty seconds, and Snow was back,
crouched in hunt mode, his eyes locked on a string.
I saw him tense, creeping closer, ready for the attack.
He chattered and launched himself like a coiled spring,
landing in strings and ran as if he was on a racetrack.
I reached for my camera. It was moment for my Kodak!

Instead of being frightened, he was perfectly content
to walk around, wrapped in lights from head to toe,
so, I let him prance like that for a while without dissent.
But when I tried to take them off, I got a hiss from Snow
letting me know that giving them up was not his intent.
It became a problem that I had to cleverly circumvent.

I thought that turning on the lights I'd already strung
might change his mind and fill Snow with a bit of fright
so, I busied myself with ornaments and stockings hung,
then found him cozied up beneath the tree. What a sight!
He was licking each brightly colored globe with his tongue.
That string still tightly wound around him, they were flung.

I didn't have the heart to take away his brand new toy.
While soothing him with my voice, I plugged him in,
standing by in case he was scared, but not my lil' boy.
Here's the photo and I swear, Snow is wearing a grin.
He's asleep before the hearth, on a pillow of corduroy.
A memory to treasure on this Christmas filled with joy.

When I placed a golden star atop my Christmas tree
I heard the faint mewing from beside the fireplace.
Snow's big blue eyes were open wide as if in plea.
I just couldn't stand the sad look upon my kitty's face
and put a star on his head, then got a holder for a battery
so his lights could move with him. Now, he's purring at me.
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Date: 12/24/2024 9:55:00 AM
Lin, congratulaitons on your win in my Christmas Poem Contest. Your poem is beautifully penned, I love it and your quote, I cannot see your image but I am sure it was lovely, well done, Merry Christmas, Constance
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Date: 12/14/2024 3:45:00 AM
Congrats! Merry Christmas to you and your family. God bless you.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2024 5:50:00 AM
Thanks, and enjoy your holidays.
Date: 12/13/2024 8:45:00 PM
congratulations dear poet. so much fun to have him pur! enjoyed the read. Happy Christmas. Cheers!!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2024 5:49:00 AM
Thank you, thriveni.
Date: 12/13/2024 3:29:00 PM
Lin, sounds like a really smart cat who knows what he wants. Really cute story.
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2024 5:49:00 AM
I don't think I've ever met a dumb cat. lol Thanks, Duke.
Date: 12/13/2024 1:50:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Lin. Have a safe and enjoyable Christmas. Take care. Jim
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2024 5:47:00 AM
Thanks very much, Jim.
Date: 12/12/2024 1:09:00 AM
Think I'll come back as a cat in the next life, stroked and fed and just sleep all day long. Having nine lives is a bonus too lol. Love the pic m Good luck Lin. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/12/2024 8:16:00 AM
If it were a longer life they lived, I'd want to be a kitty, too. Thanks, Tom.
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