Chicken On a Rainy Day

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10th July 2023

If I remember, I will not forget, To put up my umbrella when it's wet. Splashing in a puddle, is a hoot. Until that pesky rain, fills my gum boot. Betting on a race, don't bet on the snail, Don't tie a knot in a guinea pig’s tail. Wet or dry , it’s fun being a chicken, Don't want to be told I'm finger licken..

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/24/2023 8:20:00 PM

Congratulations on this cute poem. I also wouldn't want to be told I was finger licken.Enjoyed reading

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/25/2023 5:48:00 AM

Thanks Eve I love your contests

Terry Miller

Date: 7/24/2023 2:19:00 AM

delightfully amusing, congratulations

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/24/2023 3:08:00 AM

Thanks Terry Nice of you to let me know you liked it. Best wishes ( yours was much better !!! :)

Jay Narain

Date: 7/10/2023 9:58:00 AM

Fun poem.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/10/2023 1:18:00 PM

Thanks Jay, it was fun writing it.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/9/2023 7:49:00 PM

I derived great pleasure from perusing your delightful verse! Serendipitously, as I engrossed myself in your poetic offering, a timely notification alerted me to the arrival of my long-awaited tome. Eager to partake in its contents, I ventured outdoors only to find it drenched by the capricious rain, rendering its pages impervious to exploration.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/10/2023 12:16:00 AM

I bet I enjoyed your comment more!!!! Your words are like rich scent that adorns a flower garden, fine chocolate topping over ice-cream, or clusters of diamonds over pure gold. I love immersing myself in your words. Thank you dear friend.

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/9/2023 6:10:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your amusing verse! Blessings, Kim M

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/9/2023 6:48:00 PM

Thank you Kim. I appreciate you reading my little poem and letting me know that you liked it. it means a lot.