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Cherry Terror

As the sun sets my mind runs with the thoughts that I'm stung with Ever since Cinderella stung me I've been sprung since Only wanted for the helicopter gunships As my tongue slips Cherry Terror In the woods my friends love to play A-Team business on the menu press play Talk about the Anchor, talk about the Navy , talk about the pain I still carry Some fathers, some a couple hard heads but they all good men or they wouldn't walk with me Talk about the Navy, Talk about the Anchor The weight you couldn't carry it Talking 250 tons it would bury you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/1/2016 7:34:00 AM
a raw, gritty little write here, reads very natural; it's what i call a 'slow-burner', meaning that it gains impact with repeated readings - this was a tough contest, well done!
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Date: 2/25/2016 8:53:00 PM
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Date: 1/10/2016 6:34:00 PM
Hello Timothy, I like the opening line very much. As the sun sets----- a deep write my friend.... Happy to hear from you. Love LINDA
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