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Cheese Monster

I remember dancing for joy Sitting on an open shelf This beautiful maiden Strolls into the shop As my eyes whistled She picked me up Holding me in her hands Smiling down at me Excited Oh I love Words had trembling effect with this cheese Taking me home You took a little bite A little taste Nibbling Out of me Lips softly grin bursts in flavour Almost cheesy Licking delicious Opening a door You placed me on top shelf Felt like royalty Lights out wow The last face I remembered Ever so beautiful Weeks pass Feeling almost out of date Left in the dark A smell started Pungent in fungus hair Taking over almost septic Crawling green in mildew Beautiful maiden Awaiting you in dreams You open the door Squealing out Monsters frightened in the fridge All I done was shout cheese Smile darling I am all yours Sweet love Thrown in a black plastic bag Broken hearted suffocating with the rubbish Shouting walking away That's me done With cheese It was so sad The green hairy old monster Began crying Now smile for cheese As you will not like To see the ugly side Of the green hairy old Cheese monster

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/8/2013 7:35:00 PM
A very unique, fun and crazy story that made me smile!...I actually love cheese! I am from Wisconsin, in the United States, and we are a state that is famous for our cheese. So I don't have a choice but to love the stuff!...A very creative and enjoyable piece of cheese poetry!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/9/2013 4:16:00 PM
ha ha i got a smile beautiful thank you deeply
Date: 8/29/2013 2:57:00 AM
Hi Liam, Good to see you over here buddy..I liked this one from you.. Regards, Ken
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/29/2013 7:45:00 AM
THANK YOU KEN GREAT TO SEE YOU TO PAL THANKS FOR THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 8/28/2013 7:30:00 PM
You're at Poetry Soup and you didn't even tell me Liam. So now you're a cheese monster...lol.Enjoyed this one buddy....M.M
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/29/2013 7:47:00 AM
WELL LOOK WHO IT IS PETER PAN HA HA GREAT TO SEE YOU PAL KEEP US ON THE RIGHT PATH I AM HEADING OF TO THE BALL TO GO MAD AS A HATTER TALK LATER PAL HAVE A BLESSED BEAUTIFUL DAY
Date: 8/28/2013 5:39:00 PM
Very funny and somewhat tragic. I can relate because at some stage we all fear going past our used by date. Who will love us then?
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/31/2013 3:58:00 AM
THANK YOU KINDLY FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 8/28/2013 4:34:00 PM
Are you eating cheese ? : ) I love cheese but this kind of sound like a cheesy cheap blue cheese indigestion fungal pain experience.Sounds like a heart in pain using its last beat to bleed.Sad but excellent post
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/28/2013 5:00:00 PM
i thought this one would get you stuck for words i bet i got a smile so the cheese worked thank you for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated

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