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Catalina Rose

It seems like only yesterday. Catalina Rose and me, running past her gardens gateway - My nose smelling scents of universal poetry! I would kiss her delicate dulcet hand, that adorned her ancestors ring. My Catalina came from a distant land, where her father reigned as king! Catalina's beauty was just breathtaking; The magical drawing on her face was exotic. Thinking of her now is heartbreaking; For our lovemaking was like my narcotic! I was so addicted to Catalina Rose, in ways I can't explain; from her head to her toes, I craved her like a junkie does cocaine! Catalina had the prettiest lips, with long dark wavy hair. She had my heart doing flips, and I use to follow her everywhere! My princess is now gone from me; All that's left is her picture in this frame. I was glad to share her memory, For Catalina Rose was her name.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/17/2011 10:51:00 AM
what a beautiful story and delightfully told Jimmy...it's perfect just the way it is..Love,Deb
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Date: 3/16/2011 10:31:00 AM
Hi Jimmy! Very much enjoyed this write, and with a little tinkering with the flow and wording it has potential. The most important rule with poetry, be it rhyme or prose, is rhythm. I've done a re-write of stanza 2 for your perusal: I would kiss her delicate dulcet hand that adorned her ancestor's ring. My Catalina came from a distant land where her father reigned as king. Thank you for sharing, eph.
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Date: 3/16/2011 8:49:00 AM
really enjoyed reading this today, beautiful touching write :)
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Date: 3/16/2011 7:57:00 AM
Gorgeous...I understand how this feels. Great job!
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