Cascading Light

Ribbons of color Prancing through the light Bathe new buds to life

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/16/2021 10:11:00 PM

Congratulations, and excellent haiku, Kimberly. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. I am very proud of you and your poetic proliferation. The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme of "Cascading Light" stands out, and the tone moves the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, and God's richest grace and blessings to you always. –Professor, Ambassador, Dr. Joseph S. Spence Sr. (Epulaeryu Master)!

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 7/3/2021 11:37:00 AM

Gorgeous, delightful haiku!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 2/21/2021 6:20:00 AM

Oh, Kim, how much I love this haiku! Haiku is my favourite form, and your haiku paints a most beautiful picture. Love ~ Mala

Kimberly Sikorski
Date: 2/21/2021 11:40:00 AM

You have made my heart sing my friend ! My deepest thanks ! Kim

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/20/2021 2:15:00 PM

Great one, Kim Ribbon lover, Panagiota

Kimberly Sikorski
Date: 2/21/2021 11:42:00 AM

Giggling here ! I can never resist the temptation of sliding down the isle of my local craft store ! The ribbon isle should be off limits to me ! I’m addicted...this includes the rows of thread as well ! Thanks ! Kim

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 2/19/2021 4:51:00 AM

Love it. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina

Kimberly Sikorski
Date: 2/20/2021 2:12:00 PM

Thank you Gina. Believe it or not it took me all afternoon to finish the last line. I’ve been praying for everyone. Especially those who have lost family members. My cousins wife lost both her parents and then they both became ill. These are very trying times indeed ! Kim