Carrion Carry On

vultures swirl… jackals howl… carrion flesh foul... buzzards on the prowl

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/18/2025 10:55:00 AM

They were just biden their time j'd reckon.)

Michael Tor

Date: 1/17/2025 8:12:00 PM

When you see them circling something is dead below them...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2025 5:51:00 PM

i can see the circling… a scary circle!

Deb M

Date: 1/17/2025 11:14:00 AM

Fun poem….Nice rhyming BB….and terrible punctuation by me! Debx

John Lawless

Date: 1/17/2025 10:07:00 AM

and sea gulls steal hot dogs at the beach

Deb M
Date: 1/17/2025 11:13:00 AM

Thats funny John!!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 1/16/2025 9:23:00 PM

Vultures swirl,jackals howl but the living don't want to die.....short interesting poem.