Get Your Premium Membership

Carpentry

Carpentry It’s the first nail That hurts, the sharpness That pierces right through the framed constructs Of our wooden fears With unrelenting precision As if we could unhurry our blood or Hammer a dismantled dream Into a different shape Unfurled blueprints mark the unfinished house Where a doorjamb is still annoyingly unaligned Or a window frame not plumb We call upon the carpenter , The one who can hold nails In his teeth, The one who knows Crossbeams shudder In the gold dust of what they must bear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/25/2021 8:35:00 PM
Your Carpentry poem, Elizabeth, is a true gem. It glows with the resonance of metaphorical meanings. In a sense, we are all carpenters who build the crossbeams of life, in "unfinished houses."(If only I were better with the tools.) A superb write! Sincerely, Brian
Login to Reply
Date: 9/25/2021 3:46:00 PM
Whew, what a beauty this poem is, Elizabeth! Happy--and lucky!--that I stumbled upon it, because it's a keeper! Faved.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/25/2016 3:43:00 PM
Elizabeth, , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply
Date: 10/24/2016 10:07:00 AM
I just love the analogies here Elizabeth. Love and life can be like this un-level home, as we search the directory for a suitable carpenter that can make things square again.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/20/2016 10:22:00 PM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath.........
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry