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Definitions of ichor (Greek mythology)
the rarified fluid said to flow in the veins of the Gods

Remembering Brenda

Even though it was a stolen kiss You have the most kissable lips Soft and receptive And I’m easily verklempt And though it was only once All these years this kiss I’ve kept Kept in memory one frozen Yet an ethereal moment we shared By the stream Ichorous a letter Read again and again in a dream It’s the best kiss I have ever had On your porch, remembering As if it we’re yesterday

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Date: 10/11/2024 6:55:00 AM
Hmmm.. now you've got me thinking back. Yes, so many great first kisses and like you bring out, sometimes you only get one and done
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Michael Ramel
Date: 10/11/2024 8:03:00 PM
Well this was the best kiss I ever had. It wasn't my first kiss.

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