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Lust, Love, Loss........,

he, loves her so, she, like the wind, needs, to go, he wants her, to stay, but she's, a restless flame, twisting, away, he's, feeling, the storm, the thunder, his heart, torn asunder, he, needs, the love, that she proclaimed, to fill, him up, her kisses, were so powerful, each one blew, promises, into his, empty cup, lightning called her, the storm, blew her away, leaving him, with, a burnt flame.

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