Breath of Eagles

BREATH OF EAGLES climb where eagles soar open slats breathe on my shoes crude wooden railing 7/10/2017 haiku

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Dean Wood

Date: 7/11/2017 4:42:00 PM

Acrophobic anyone? Sounds like a beautiful climb and a beautiful haiku!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 5:00:00 PM

Thanks, Dean!

Chris Green

Date: 7/11/2017 6:37:00 AM

I just love how you see things. Beautifully designed Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 8:45:00 AM

Thank you, Chris! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/11/2017 3:04:00 AM

...uplifting dear, Kim! Much enjoyed.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 8:45:00 AM

Thanks, Demetrios!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/11/2017 3:03:00 AM

...uplifting dear, Kim! Much enjoyed.

Constance La France

Date: 7/11/2017 2:26:00 AM

kim this is real nice, i like where you put the turn

Darren White

Date: 7/11/2017 2:25:00 AM

What an evocative haiku! That's wonderful imagery there, I have fear of heights, and could feel this :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 7:46:00 PM

Thank you, Darren!

White Wolf

Date: 7/11/2017 1:16:00 AM

Nothing crude about this! A lovely haiku, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 7:46:00 PM

Thank you, WW!