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Breaking Point

Come on and break me down finding the spot not yet found as you tear my knees to the ground wearing arrogance as if its your crown as if its life as if a right, that's yet been unspoken can heal this heart too often broken twisting like a knife breaking through my souls skin leaving me alone and twisted erasing my rules never before listed all caught up in this sin of which I can't escape of which I can't win

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/16/2016 10:49:00 PM
Dugat-K, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/14/2016 3:14:00 PM
LEAH D, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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Date: 10/22/2009 12:15:00 PM
Nice piece Leah >> James
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Date: 10/21/2009 2:33:00 PM
This is the most beautiful light poetry I have read today. Wishing you all the best.
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Date: 10/21/2009 3:18:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Leah. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2009 9:22:00 PM
I really like this, it has good flow and the symbolism is very thought evoking. Good Job!
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