Blue Jay

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Ok Ok Ok Blue Jay With your blue “wheedlewee” and “tooltool”, Blueberry in beak Blue sky in full peak Tweet your blue wheedlewee and tooltool

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/22/2022 6:25:00 AM

I smiled as I read this - they are a fine songbird and you've captured it! Linda

Raven Howell
Date: 7/22/2022 8:05:00 AM

Thanks for your kind comment. They make ME smile! Ha!

Marikate Kingston

Date: 2/27/2022 5:51:00 PM

Gee, he sounds just like that. You did such a clever job using words to make his sounds. We enjoy our birdfeeder here in Ct very much. Blue jays are so nice to see, but they can be such meanies :( Cute, clever poem, I enjoyed.

Raven Howell
Date: 7/22/2022 8:06:00 AM

I'm a New Yorker and you're right - bring the bird feeder and you'll get Jays year 'round!

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 2/25/2022 5:24:00 PM

Couldn't help but smile as I read this. A lovely cheery poem. Cheers Anne :-)

Raven Howell
Date: 7/22/2022 8:07:00 AM

Hi there, Anne! Thanks for your warm words!