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Blue Daisy Chain

Lay back on the grass softly green, Squint till sky is blue and hazy; Spreading fingers feel now between, Finding a small wild blue daisy. Pluck the flower and give a twirl, “Loves me or not”, the petals pluck; Pretending I can’t count the swirl, And the flower controls my luck. Saddened the flower I discard, Stretch my arms out above my head, And sigh disappointment out loud. Another flower pick unread. Why waste the blooms on forlorn hope, For a love that's not happening? I gently pierce the stem like rope, Thread the daisy through fastening. A necklace chain I make to deck, The one who only deserves the best; And proudly sling around my neck, The blue daisy chain cross my chest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/24/2017 11:49:00 PM
Very good poetic expression of beauty and the related emotions ... Btw, thank you for liking my Sedoka ...
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Date: 8/4/2017 8:09:00 PM
whimsical and beautifully crafted.
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Date: 7/3/2017 1:19:00 AM
To make chains in flowers is a regular Indian custom . I still use to decorate hair plucking or picking up flowers from my garden. Nicely done. Congrats
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Date: 7/2/2017 5:44:00 AM
Hi Cecelia , beautifully done , making chains I remember so well and , I love you I love you not , picking petal's ,, thank you for sharing it has made me feel so happy :))))hugs from Ireland xx
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Date: 6/16/2017 9:11:00 AM
:Remembering games and daisy chains and laughs, Got to keep the loonies on the path" This is what your poem brings to mind, Cecelia. good luck:)
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