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Blue Ascension

Blue, blue as my mood Light streams through, warms the being Float, above the haze

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Richard Pickett

Date: 12/3/2009 9:26:00 AM

very smooth this one is... You do have style my dear... I love it...RdP

James Fraser

Date: 11/22/2009 1:58:00 PM

Nice Haiku Doris, i like this one > good luck in Raul's contest >> James

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/21/2009 7:22:00 PM

Nice haiku but I think Float should have been floats. Peace and blessings Mattthew Anish

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/21/2009 5:54:00 PM

perfect capture of Raul's picture! Doris!... and thanks for your comments! jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/21/2009 5:38:00 PM

If this haiku is for Raul's contest it is a winner for sure... lovely visual.. thankxxx for sharing and for your comments on my poetry tonight.. blessings ... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"