Blind Lust

one who lusts blindly for the absolute sadly- never sees truly

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/11/2018 2:56:00 PM

This is so good Greg! May I suggest you change it to Senryu and submit it to Mick Talbot's Senryu poetry contest it's so good ;) xomo

Greg Gaul
Date: 7/11/2018 8:23:00 PM

So kind of you to say this Maureen. I was waivering on this one myself. I already entered a senryu in Mick's contest. I'll noodle this some more, I do respect your opinion. Not sure but thankful.

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/10/2018 2:32:00 PM

wee said

Greg Gaul
Date: 7/10/2018 7:02:00 PM

Casarah, thanks for the read and kind comment.