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Black Clouds

Black clouds when I see you, so beautiful you are I wonder if you see me as I watch from afar Sometimes you bring us rain thunder and light Sometimes you bring us pain and then we are alright Sometimes you bring tornadoes, hurricanes and ice Sometimes you stay for days and sometimes just a night Sometimes you shadow over like a rolling cloud of smoke Sometimes nothing happens, just you trying to destroy our hopes Black clouds you are so beautiful I hope the world sees For all the storms and darkness you brought you taught us to believe!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/6/2015 5:03:00 AM
A wonderful write to wellcome yourself to the great community where you will meet variety of peoples who are willing and ready to support by giving you positive feedback. Also is a place where you will lean and be sharpened by reading others poetry. I would like to make friend with you, also I will be looking forward to see read much of your wonderful write. Hope you don't mind to check me up, and congratulation for having your first offering featured .........A.M.
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Date: 7/25/2015 11:08:00 PM
YOLANDA:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Yolanda Scott
Date: 7/26/2015 7:03:00 AM
Thank you Skat. Still pinching myself!!! Just wow!!!
Date: 7/22/2015 7:42:00 PM
Yolanda, beautifully penned poem, a wonderful 7 and congratulations on having it selected as a Feature Poem for the week
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Yolanda Scott
Date: 7/23/2015 9:19:00 PM
Thank you so much. I just love Poetry Soup, and wish I had found it sooner. God bless.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/22/2015 7:44:00 PM
And welcome to poetry soup, enjoy the journey
Date: 7/13/2015 1:17:00 AM
Yolanda, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Yolanda Scott
Date: 7/13/2015 7:36:00 AM
Thank you Linda. I'm happy I found this community and look for to reading and writing more poetry.
Date: 7/12/2015 9:08:00 PM
Yolanda, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Yolanda Scott
Date: 7/13/2015 7:38:00 AM
Thank you Skat. Such warm welcomes I have received. Happy to have found Poet Soups and look forward to reading, writing and meeting other poets. God bless!!!

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