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Birds With Broken Wings

two birds from a distant land wandering in the wilderness with their distorted wings, a pitiable pain and hapless heart ... life had become a meaningless art damages were irrecoverable she was a blood splattered queen and his had a fallen dream. two perfect souls living in imperfection... till they met each other love flooded their heart with eternity.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/21/2011 8:10:00 AM
Wow so much feeling in this wonderful rendering Red, harry
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Date: 12/15/2011 11:42:00 AM
And so hope lives on. Never give up. God is faithful. I have that on a plaque. A biblical scripture. 1st Corrintheans or something. Have a wonderful christmas.
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Date: 12/15/2011 11:00:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem. Very well done.
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Date: 12/11/2011 6:55:00 PM
I hate reading your poetry now.....but that doesn't mean you aren't the best poet on any continent.
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Date: 12/10/2011 8:03:00 PM
Your poem has a very happy for our avian friends. "Hail to thee blithe spirit. Bird thou never wert." - Percy Shelley Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/7/2011 8:47:00 PM
beautiful write indeed. I loved the part... life had become a meaningless art. great poem you got here!
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Date: 12/7/2011 7:00:00 AM
so many meanings,,,so beautiful a write,,,hope you are doing well,,,this is so enjoyable and a pleasure to read....
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Date: 12/6/2011 5:25:00 PM
Beautiful, Smriti. You know how to write them. Now I am inspired. Maybe I will write one for you
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:34:00 AM
A beautiful poem. Love the wording. Kim
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Date: 12/6/2011 4:28:00 PM
Thanx Kim...much appreciated..

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