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"Beacause some days, I just don't feel like waking up, and just want to remain in my dreams."
Beware the dawn of bitter light Breaking bows of arcing flight Casting sails full of schemes Drifting, fading, lucid screams Beware the myriad of twirling hues Miles away from waking ruse A brazen thief of peaceful bliss Plunder, pillage, a devil’s kiss Beware the day of hollow woes Waning moonlight ivory doze Longing for a wink of sleep Touching, holding, you I keep The fear of day, it haunts me so For morrow comes and dreams must go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/22/2020 9:45:00 AM
Hi Andreanna: Your espouses your recall of dreams Bravo!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/22/2020 9:46:00 AM
Your poetry espouses your recall of dreams!
Date: 5/18/2020 10:27:00 AM
I love it , Andreanna. ...Fran
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Date: 5/18/2020 9:59:00 AM
I can relate, I live in my dreams. I enjoy your writing, Andreanna.
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Date: 8/16/2017 3:06:00 PM
Awesomely written! Smashing couplet this!
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 8/21/2017 12:28:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 8/15/2017 8:18:00 AM
Very well written and relatable. I liked this a lot.
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 8/21/2017 12:28:00 AM
Thank you! I'm so glad it resonates with you.
Date: 8/13/2017 4:40:00 PM
This is a great piece! Precise words that rhyme with great flow and the imagery is beautiful too. Love this one.
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Date: 8/13/2017 4:37:00 PM
Thoughtfully written!
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Date: 7/5/2017 1:16:00 PM
Truly awesome poetry. A pleasure to read this jewel this morn.. A fav...
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Date: 6/20/2017 10:25:00 AM
Some morning are like this! I love this poem.
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Date: 6/16/2017 8:48:00 PM
Andreanna, if that is your picture not only you are beautiful, you are extremely talented. Do not worry, all pains will be cured except old age. Welcome to PS
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Date: 6/16/2017 8:18:00 PM
I've read your three posts Andreanna. This one I like the most. You are quite talented.
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 6/17/2017 10:26:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words. I wrote this a while ago. It's one of my personal favorites as well. Thank you for reading
Date: 6/14/2017 4:00:00 AM
- A lovely and touching poem, great written Andreanna - hugs // Sun :)
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Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 6/17/2017 10:24:00 AM
Thank you kindly... :)

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