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Betrayal

Poison filler her tears, As soon as he walked in she had to face her fears, Their eyes met, his face rained with sweat, manless man he was, she was more of a man than he was, love was a language he could no longer speak of, Betrayal sat on the tip of his tongue, wanting to fight with her words she realized the night was too young, too young to understand, the young ones upstairs slept, although she looked strong, her heart wept, his bags sat packed, greeting him, wanting to say sorry ,he realized his voice was too dim, sharing ones body with another woman is nothing more than a sin, not daring to look back, he walked through the wooden door, The devil walks in disguise, but fidelity is what he wore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/7/2014 10:52:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Lisa :) - I choose your first moving written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/6/2014 10:18:00 PM
Great feat of expression! I feel your pain. Spelling, very important. PR
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Date: 5/6/2014 2:27:00 PM
Hi Lisa, wow, what a poem.., Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/6/2014 9:29:00 AM
I know this devil, sometimes he's the one we least expect it... Very deep, and cuts the person, who speaks it on the tip of the tongue.. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/6/2014 8:14:00 AM
Wow, what a powerful great write from begging to end, so much emotion captured but still subtle, look forward to seeing more! Welcome to Poetry Soup!! :)
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