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And ever above, clouds of sorrow assemble in thunderous ranks: a surfeit of threat and gloom. And ever below, unhappy footsteps surrender rhythm to unyielding pavement— against a gray and endless plain. Who but a fool dreams that sorrow can be bartered for kindness and love? The beggared soul abides. And, in his eyes, the ashen world grows, blurs and overflows to run down his cheeks. And it rains.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/21/2018 1:24:00 PM
Beautiful, mournful, evocative — everything a great poem should be! Thank you for sharing your talent! Cindi
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Mark Peterson
Date: 7/21/2018 4:48:00 PM
Remarkable words for an earlier poem of mine that got featured. Thanks for enhancing my day with your words.
Date: 1/15/2014 5:02:00 AM
Touched, tearful, and adding you to my favorites. Oh what treasures I have found in the Soup!
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Date: 10/26/2013 2:28:00 PM
- Touching and well written, Mark. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Mark Peterson
Date: 10/27/2013 11:36:00 PM
Anne Lise. Thanks again very much for your kind remarks and support of my poetry. Keeps me working! Mark
Date: 10/25/2013 8:40:00 PM
This is an excellent description of sorrow. Love the first stanza. Bravo!
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Mark Peterson
Date: 10/26/2013 5:10:00 PM
Thanks, Jon. I'm beginning to think that I should end most of my poems after the first stanza! Mark

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