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Being Utterly Modern

There you are gazing into the water as it coils around the pier, hoping to decipher its tidal language, divine a message in the slow lift and fall of the swell, the soft lapping sound echoing through the dark shadows below. But whatever is here seems to have withdrawn deeper into itself, far beyond where your senses can reach or your uprooted mind can go, severed as it is from the origins of its own creation. You are of this age, utterly modern, purged of myth and deaf to the spirits that once moved here in the water and roamed the land, the sung sagas of your ancestors. In the isolation of this cleared world a terrible silence has fallen in which the only sound now is your own pulse imprisoned in the confines of an ear.

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Date: 11/1/2024 9:47:00 AM
Hello Paul, your evocative piece beautifully captures the disconnect between modern humanity and our ancestral roots. I like how the water and pier create a haunting atmosphere, emphasizing the protagonist's isolation. Your work invites deep reflection on our relationship with nature and our cultural heritage. After all, it all goes together. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 10/31/2024 8:12:00 AM
These lines are very deep seeded in mystery, Paul. I've always been fascinated by what lies beneath. Often thought of what I'd find if I could pull a Moses and part a section of the Mississippi River near me. What a great line is '... the only sound now is your own pulse imprisoned in the confines of an ear." I also liked, "You are of this age, utterly modern, purged of myth." Your poetry is a huge cut above the norm here.
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/1/2024 5:15:00 AM
Thankyou Lin for wading through this one...not an easy task as it has some complexities. Mythmaking, the imagination, a sense of the mystery of things are all very much the stuff of poetry. But you know that as one of the strengths of your work is the space and honor you give to imagination. A gift. Thankyou dear friend.

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