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One day in garden I was digging into dirt Hit unknown bees nest I was swarmed, attacked and stung Running as I ripped off shirt! Heidi Sands 9/2/21 Placed 3rd in A Buggy Tanka Contest.

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Date: 9/11/2021 9:19:00 PM
Good one, Heidi, congratulations on your win. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2021 12:54:00 PM
Thank you very much Eve :)
Date: 9/3/2021 6:49:00 PM
Sounds to me like hornets...they burrow near the ground...their sting is very painful...good poem!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/3/2021 8:12:00 PM
Yes, the stings were very painful. Thank you :)
Date: 9/3/2021 3:04:00 AM
Nice entry for the contest Heidi, best wishes
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/3/2021 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 9/2/2021 3:54:00 PM
We do what is necessary! Good one!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/2/2021 4:01:00 PM
Yes, thanks. They were inside my shirt stinging me. Take care :)

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