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There are days when I don't look for much, just an old chair on the back porch, a few thoughts to pick over, perhaps a memory to recall and, to entertain the eye, splotches of sunlight to dance around a cup of coffee cooling on a table. Life distilled to such a simple array of mental bric-a-brac set in a familiar scene. Cezanne knew it in a bowl of fruit. And yet how clear the moment, how this bright beam of consciousness illuminates a patch of existence making it a lens into a world trembling on the brink of becoming. I keep returning for more.

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Date: 2/22/2024 11:39:00 PM
What I just adore about your writing, Paul, is the deep, yet understated word. The gentle, yet homely sense of knowing the infinite. You do so much with what seems like so little. You are indeed a master craftsman; economic, precise, skillful. I can return to your poetry over and over just to marvel at the emotional nuances. What more can I say, Paul. Blessings x
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/24/2024 4:01:00 AM
Very much humbled by your comments Sam. Feel somewtat privileged to learn that my little creations connect at that level of human experience and carry meaning. Hoped for but to receive acknowledgement is deeply moving. I thank you sincerely.
Date: 2/2/2024 7:48:00 AM
Oh Paul…l find this poem “simply beautiful” it resonated with me and l truly felt and visualised it! A real feel good write for me! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/15/2024 8:40:00 PM
Apologies for the long delay in acknowledging your kind words Deb. Have been in a place without windows...thankfully emerged. Many thanks as always, treasured.

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