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Beauty Scent

As I lie here on my bed, time stands still sorrow and compassion enter the room, as my mind empties For nothing now is sweeter than your scent, Which is as strong as mother nature's beauty, on a sunny day your smile is like the moon, it glows your touch is as gentle as a feather your presence is like, no other

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/23/2009 1:41:00 PM
Hi William! welcome to the soup! and thanks for your kind comments! what I like about this fine write is the twist in line three....searching the sorrow and compassion amid the beautiful memories, ....sumthin's brewin' ; ) keep inkin' brother!!!~ jim
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Date: 6/23/2009 1:03:00 PM
Nice poem William, welcome to the Soup>>James
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Date: 6/23/2009 7:33:00 AM
sorrow and compassion enter the room-->Awsome!
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