Barbados Blast

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Barbados trip, That little island took us by the balls - With sunny grip! Caribbean bliss, Bridgetown's colourful heartwarming charm, One cannot miss! Ships come and go, Yet unperturbed to tourists' wave remains - An ocean glow! It was a blast, Like any other fleeing fantasy - It cannot last! What happens now?! We depart leaving behind paradise To a snow plow! (Not all roads lead back to Rome, Canada - our lovely home) February 24, 2023

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Daniel Turner

Date: 2/25/2023 9:41:00 AM

A fun read, Margarita. I went to Jamaica once. It was too crowded for me. Canada huh? What part?

Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/25/2023 9:52:00 AM

Flying back in a few hours. Was a compelling write, our beach was more on a deserted side. Was awesome! Penned a lot in two weeks:) 1,5 h from Toronto - Peterborough