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Bamboo Night

melting by star light slow, tranquil, solemn moon cold snow on bamboo white

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Date: 7/24/2024 9:28:00 PM
the second sentence is masterful use of adjectives
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Lora Como
Date: 7/25/2024 7:26:00 PM
But Earl, to do it with ADJECTIVES is real skill!
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 7/25/2024 1:41:00 PM
Hi Lora, Thank you so much. I'm glad that you recognize that there is more to a haiku than that which meets the eye at first glance. It is fun to create an atmosphere, a feel, an emotion, an entire world with the use of the fewest of words. Have a wonderful day. Take care, Earl

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