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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/27/2009 5:05:00 AM
The form has the proper line and syllable count while your words offer true and clear imagery with meaning for the reader. Very well done. Michael
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Date: 1/26/2009 8:28:00 AM
Another stellar write Brian. You paint such wonder with your words..I am amazed how you can pack so much in a short format. Thanks for the awesome comments.
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Date: 1/26/2009 8:05:00 AM
Beautiful lanterne, Brian. Lovely image. Love, Robin
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