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Hang the rules of poetry, bring in the guillotine Electrocute me in the executioner's chair The death penalty lingers the air It's the event you can plan for There's no firing squad suddenly appearing I cannot help but wonder if the crowd will be jeering My throat hurts still My wrists bruised from each cuff Finally my crimes are deemed 'enough' Let me excuse myself for my words I'm just feeling overwrought Crazily I should have given it all more thought Contain me for I'm angry It's not a feeling that will last Ulysses may advocate I am strapped to the mast Extricate me from this wearisome position In the constant eye of the storm It's not a place where meaningful ideas form I'll rest on this stone pillow Self persecution seems alluring As feeling so sorry for myself has become boring

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Date: 7/9/2024 7:21:00 AM
Great piece @ last Script. Expression not bound by rules digs deeper into the creative space and unearths the most intricate emotions of one self. Expectations on the other hand is a vice that kills the creative juice when not met.
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Steven Mwakatundu
Date: 7/9/2024 9:11:00 AM
Raw is the way. You really comprehend the depth and creativity embedded in a piece after a revisit.
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Date: 7/9/2024 7:46:00 AM
Insightful comment Steven, sometimes it's best not to be concerned with a perfect poem, just to expel the feeling and reflect on what you've got. I do leave them a little raw though unfortunately and they surprise me when I revisit them. Thanks for your comment, I appreciate it

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