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Autumn Flutter

autumn bronzed bubbling trees sway, sweep, and tilt, twist, turn, then bow; spawning boughs tossing hurricaned dust. ~~~~~~~~~ (autumn flutter)

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Date: 9/24/2024 10:21:00 AM
I love the movement in your trees, Arlo Throwing off the dust of hurricanes. Bubbling is a good word to describe how leaves flutter. SuZ
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Arlo Parker
Date: 9/24/2024 6:20:00 PM
Life of trees includes so many wonderful, refreshing variables to celebrate, season upon season, Suz. :o))
Date: 9/14/2024 7:55:00 AM
a very intriguing write Arlo containing some interesting visuals nicely done
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Date: 9/14/2024 8:51:00 AM
Thanks for your visit, JL. Fun piece to write. :-))

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