Autumn Atonement - a Halloween Monoku

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~~~~~~~ plundered loot - colorful wrappers piled like leaves – suffer autumn’s wrath ~~~~~~~ *A simplified version of my Halloween blitz that was submitted for Bobby May's contest "If I were your Brother" ;)

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Sandra Adams

Date: 10/20/2019 7:06:00 AM

this will be the scene on buses soon...i so dislike halloween for that reason....good monoku my friend... hugs :)

Hello There
Date: 10/20/2019 11:23:00 PM

thank you, Sandy ~ hugs :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/18/2019 11:24:00 AM

She's back and she still ain't happy. Speaking of the photo of course. : ) Cool my friend, short, concise and scary as hell. Here, take the candy, take my wallet and here's your stupid cell phone back...ok? : )

Hello There
Date: 10/18/2019 11:33:00 AM

Oh my gosh ~ I'm laughing so hard over here! Just having fun with the theme. Hehehe =D Thanks, Chris :)