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At the Old Grist Mill

Water rises in damp clouds above the falls Red from the old grist mill reflecting through The backlighting sunshine causing ethereal Rainbow-like patterns in the mistiness, while I watch the gigantic wheel fling cold water Downstream where it plunges into the murk, Creating a deep hole not suitable for diving And too dangerous for children to swim in, so, I slip my bare feet over the moss-covered ledge Dangling them above the stream’s updraft, Watching them come soaking wet and clean At the end of my sopping brand new jeans.
written November 5, 2021

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Date: 11/9/2021 7:43:00 AM
I love this one; it reminds me of the old grist wheel at the Iowa State Fair. We all loved it!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/9/2021 9:13:00 AM
Aren't they special? I love to visit them.
Date: 11/6/2021 9:30:00 PM
I just love your poems about the sights, sounds, and experiences of our vanishing childhoods, about things like this grist-mill. Very special, my friend. Thank you, Gershon
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/7/2021 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon. When someone likes a poem I wrote, my happy heart sings! Have a great day, friend.

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