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Astral Love

Your love surrounds me in colors Passion and desire call me to you I can not see you, yet I know you are there Together on a blanket of spiraling color we meet High above the Earth, in a realm unlike the one we have known You touch me and fire rages within me Embers become flames as memories flood over me like water Though not a physical touch your fingertips glide over me, tracing my soul I gasp in delight and a breath escapes me, the air of life Like gold or silver your eyes shine upon me I see your spirit intertwined with mine We are free, we are energy Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/24/2009 7:26:00 PM

This poem owns!!@.@ Awsome awsome awsome!! Just like Bowie's Space Oddity jojjo could not avoid the music in the background of my forhead, yep yep jojojojo really really unique experience of expressing love, =) thanks for sharing, yeah!!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/22/2009 3:09:00 PM

so passionate and deep-wonderful

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/20/2009 2:47:00 PM

Dear Lolita,This Great POEM makes one think is this carnal LOVE or Spiritual LOVE One of mankind or one of GOD Superbly done Very Inspirational ALWAYS YOURS...HG

David Smalling

Date: 4/17/2009 2:28:00 PM

What a precious, beautiful way to be ... how cuddly, how cute ... mmm, let me just say the poem pulls me in and quit.

Jane Bowen

Date: 4/13/2009 11:02:00 AM

Beautifully written and alouring. You have done it once again friend. THis poem is hot hot hot ...Steamy baby! It's full of beautiful description only a writer would be able to write like! You took me on a fantasy realm unlike the world I know....wowsers girl...that's some good stuff. Take care and keep up the creations...you're going to make us all envious of your lover and you...he he he...naaa you just keep loving baby doll, What a powerful write here Lolita...thanks for the inspiration!:)

John Rhinem

Date: 4/11/2009 1:29:00 PM

"Hello Again Dear Gifted, Precious and Lovely Lena Townsend!!!":):)~I sincerely hope that You are doing well dear lady~and that life is treating You wonderfully!!?:):)~I also wanted to stop by to wish "You and Your Loves A Blessed and Beautiful Easter Dear~With Warmth and Love Always, John!!!":):) Bye ~

Brian Strand

Date: 4/10/2009 7:49:00 AM

Thank you for your blog comments today Lolita.Rgds Brian

John Rhinem

Date: 4/9/2009 2:48:00 PM

....And as I refered unto while I read this beautifully color and image laced write of Yours once again~unto myself; these sentiments of Yours, could be aimed at an individual, a whole, nature and all, or, "God Himself!!?":):)~Either or, it is a very well crafted, creative and "Beautiful Write~Straight From Your Brightened Heart & Soul Dear Lena!!!":):)~"My Love Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!":):) Happy Easter Dear ~

John Rhinem

Date: 4/9/2009 2:41:00 PM

Ahh, the many different possibilities to this wonderful writes object of "Your Love!?":):)~"Hello My Gifted & Beautiful Friend Lena Townsend!!!":):)~I truly hope that "Your Easter Week" is going absolutely wonderfully for Yourself dear lady!!!?:):)....cont....

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/9/2009 2:14:00 PM

really a lot of fun to read imaginative work like this, Lolita, the reader can just float away on your surreal images of possibilities, wow! one of my fav's of yours, jmg

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2009 12:41:00 PM

The magnificent "energy" of love soars to great heights in this incredible poem. The impact is as magical as the Milky Way! Great poem, Lolita! Love, Carolyn

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/9/2009 10:34:00 AM

Very imaginative ying yang choreography of thoughts ... a sweet seductive write.

John Weber

Date: 4/9/2009 9:22:00 AM

Passion forms a whole new element to be reckoned with here, Lolita! Superlative word selection and pacing! Warm regards, John.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/9/2009 8:03:00 AM

COOL! Sensual and passionate... true love transcends everything. BRAVO my dear! Best wishes, Keith

Daver Austin

Date: 4/9/2009 7:19:00 AM

Ah, Lolita after my own heart. This sounds much like a wonderful meditation or contemplation, though more passionate than some. Great imagination. Like, imagination is what keeps my world together. Love, daver

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 4/9/2009 6:19:00 AM

mmm. yummy. a delightful piece to read again, well done Lolita. Happy Easter and thanks for your lovely thoughts and comments...Anna-Marie.

Brian Strand

Date: 4/9/2009 1:48:00 AM

Well written Lolita.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.Easter blessings to you & yours

Aleera De La Keur

Date: 4/9/2009 1:45:00 AM

I like how you the elements of Earth while writing this, I'm not sure if it was on purpose or not, but interesting quite the same. Loved it....Aleera

Sebastian Aaron Baez

Date: 4/8/2009 3:03:00 PM

Impressive and inspirational, passionate and everlasting words, I love it!

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/8/2009 10:28:00 AM

Wow. This is otherworldly sensual and very beautiful. An awesome dream like perspective on possibilities. Love it! Love, Shar

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/8/2009 9:44:00 AM

Nice. It made me think of free spirits on a magic carpet ride flying above the earth in dreamy love. You have painted a beautiful picture here with words.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/8/2009 9:18:00 AM

This is very beautiful..love the passion that blaze in the write..done in a very sexy, sweet manner.. very classy write.