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Ascension

They've gathered round this lonely grave, There's so few; Not to pay respects to the man they never knew. To the man they squeezed the spirit from his soul, at such a tender age; The man they tried to cage. My price to pay, For rejecting their ways. And now they file past my coffin door, All thinking I have lost the war. Some have tears are they really real, They never visited before to show they feel. Perhaps the tears are that I can no longer be used, To serve their purposes and take the abuse. Yes they think they've won, Another life undone. And put the blame on me, Not realizing, as I ascend from their presence, I'm finally truly free. Returning to the home, God has for me.

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Date: 4/18/2023 10:08:00 AM
Carl, what excellent writing and your poem touched me deeply, tears, God sees everything so we better treat people well !
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Carl Fraser
Date: 4/18/2023 10:16:00 PM
Thank you Constance for your kind words, it's always best to rise above all the mayhem and trust God, have a great night, Carl
Date: 4/18/2023 6:59:00 AM
Wow! Still perhaps some realize the effect…see the whole picture. A true saint of God would leave earth with no bitterness in their heart…only forgiveness reaching out to lost souls. Still, I love the emotion in this poem; don’t know the setting.
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Carl Fraser
Date: 4/18/2023 10:18:00 PM
Thanks Kim for reading my poem. I hold no grudges so I may leave this earth unstained.Have a great night

Book: Shattered Sighs