As We Dream On

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During sleep, as we dream, we are the dreamed object, knowing not the dreamer is also us in trance. Love then’s the redeemer. During sleep, as we dream, we’re bereft of free will or so it does appear, responding by instinct, emoting joy and fear. During sleep, as we dream, we’re yet attached to form, though it’s an illusion of which we’re ignorant, so what’s the solution? During sleep, as we dream, if stillness our fulcrum, awareness void-centric, we succumb not then to any ego spawned trick. 16-June-2022

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Joe Maverick

Date: 6/16/2022 1:52:00 AM

I particularly note the last parts Here, did you enter a poem in One of my earlier contests.? I was Going to rank it quite highly yet It was gone I was late in finalising That contest..) Oh well maybe you Will try another of mine.? I have Just put one up, as it goes; all the Best whatever falls.'

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/16/2022 2:14:00 AM

Don’t recall, Joe. I do enter contests regularly, not all but yet quite a few