As I Run

As I run. I begin to think. Minds become in sync. We all fall, One day we all raise.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 1:50:00 PM

peter avalos, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/27/2015 2:15:00 PM

Peter, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/24/2012 2:01:00 PM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Peter. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol