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Ancient Edifice

Ancient big building One look at thousand of years Red wall, white snow.

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Date: 12/27/2024 7:50:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem, in reading, I couldn't help but focus and the last line and it saddened my heart, for in this restless world today I see- white walls and red snow.
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Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 12/27/2024 12:33:00 PM
Thank you for delving the meaning of this haiku poem. Though it change in your word placement, I got you. Thank you for your nice comment. I really appreciate it very much.

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