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Ancestral Farmstead

I returned to our farmstead last autumn on the driveway where I kicked marbles and plucked brambles catching my gaze- Now overgrown at sixty-two horse wagons filled the blank spaces of my remembered landscape... I walked like a ghost looking for dear home, but found this lofty edifice ridiculing, mocking me from its skylight-- The dogwood trees Grandma nurtured now impetuously ravaged and gnarled, casting shadows on translucent mirrors-- past her dream of a lush orchard, that my eyes lingered through a heap for treasures, hoping to discover a piece of yesterday's laughter, among the junk of ancestral, broken wood. ------------- Emile Pinet's Contest: New Poems Only 4/16/2018

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Date: 4/18/2018 7:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this hopeful and sad poem! Well done. I like the last line... it got me.
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Date: 4/16/2018 4:47:00 PM
Wonderful imagery of your past memories, Nette. I enjoyed reading your poem, and congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/16/2018 4:22:00 PM
OH, Nette, that last line...."among the junk of ancestral, broken wood." What a vivid description of the angst of fading memories.
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Date: 4/16/2018 1:58:00 PM
Back with congrats, nette. Superbly done.
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Date: 4/16/2018 12:52:00 PM
Wow Nette, this is exceptional! Made a lump in my throat when reading it! Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 4/16/2018 12:29:00 PM
I can almost picture the place ! Very evocative Congratulations!
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Date: 4/16/2018 11:22:00 AM
Beautiful like always, Nette, congratulations on your win!!!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/16/2018 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations Nette! Your amazing poem has placed in my PoetrySoup contest. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 4/16/2018 3:05:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. All the best for the contest.
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Date: 4/16/2018 3:02:00 AM
A beautiful poem with memories, Nette - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/15/2018 6:15:00 PM
What lovely imagery, nette. Love these lines "my eyes lingered through a heap for treasures, hoping to discover a piece of yesterday's laughter,"
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Date: 4/15/2018 5:56:00 PM
I think I would have found a seat and just let my memory wander...good luck
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Date: 4/15/2018 5:43:00 PM
Even in the suburbs, tall buildings sprout like mushrooms. May our heritage be respected by commercialism. An excellent poem which moved me.
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Date: 4/15/2018 4:42:00 PM
I walked in your journey through your memory lane..sad to see the decay..but there once was a pleasant sound..expertly depicted..best for a win, nette.
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